Away Game
The fifth Reza book is now available!
With his equipment safely locked away, Jonny Keen is working around the clock to finish his game so he can finally be free of the burden he and his wife have found themselves under.
Reza is always one step ahead, and he has many ways to raise the stakes and turn up the dial on Jonny’s suffering. Jonny makes his game while he is a tragic, powerless pawn in his masters’ arcade.
In any good game, there’s always the rules, and Jonny knows once a month he can find the release he needs, he just has to grit his teeth and hang tight.
But if he thought it would be easy he doesn’t know his landlord …
With his equipment safely locked away, Jonny Keen is working around the clock to finish his game so he can finally be free of the burden he and his wife have found themselves under.
Reza is always one step ahead, and he has many ways to raise the stakes and turn up the dial on Jonny’s suffering. Jonny makes his game while he is a tragic, powerless pawn in his masters’ arcade.
In any good game, there’s always the rules, and Jonny knows once a month he can find the release he needs, he just has to grit his teeth and hang tight.
But if he thought it would be easy he doesn’t know his landlord …
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ReplyDeleteI finished it and boy I was blown away. Yes I spent a couple hours pouring through. For some reason btw the chronological order is all wrong as it says this is book 2 of a 4 book series and puts Reza's Game as after. Obviously wrong and hope it gets fixed.
Anyway I loved all the scenes and how incredibly hot everything was. I found myself feeling horrible for Jonny and Charlie at the same time when they were mad at each other. I was wondering if Charlie is developing a little bit of a drug problem. The Tate and Charlie scene bothered my and I hate the idea of Tate stealing her away from Jonny and hope that doesn't happen.
A real weird part of me really dislikes Tate as I think he's actually just as bad as Reza and hiding it or maybe something else. I hope he's not like that annoying character Cole. Maybe I just hate it when a jerk like that steals another persons girl, it's exciting but ultimately it's a major turn off if it happens in the end. (confusing I know).
Can't wait to see the next book!
I read it last night too, and I am just loving letting this book marinate. I feel like KT went next level cuckold angst during Reza and Jonny's talk after returning from the Bahamas. So many layers just in that discussion about what happened that night.
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Reza was convinced (probably lying to Jonny but certainly convinced me) that Charlie was mad at herself. Why? She was mad because she ruined her opportunity to have multiple men with her at the center because she got too sloppy drunk . Too sloppy and when the moment arised at the end of the night, she was too desperate looking she had Reza concerned about her.
Absolute beauty caked into that whole discussion. KT is a full-blown angst super saiyan now lol.
Also in the amazing moments category: Reza's 'I'm so hungry' video to Jonny, was packed with some dark humor that I admire.
I love Charlie in this story (finally starting to come out of her shell, though not entirely yet). She's still a farm girl from Kansas, but now she's starting to really show some independence, and taking her lumps for it.
I have a couple of theories about Tate... Several which probably are bullshit but would be interesting nonetheless. One is that Tate has a woman that he cares about very deeply back home and is suffering himself in Reza's hands, but not in the same way Jonny is obviously.
DeleteAnother is that he's an FBI agent (far fetched I know) but the reason I thought this was why didn't he jump at the chance and even if it was because he is a nice guy I think maybe he doesn't take his clothes off because he's wearing a wire? Anyway I enjoyed it.
I get the feeling that Jonny does have it in him to kill Reza, (I run with the theory that pretty much everyone has the capacity to kill).
Now on to Separate Schools (rubbing hands together).
A thought i had about charlie at the club was she over intoxicated to stifle the pain of her yearnings vs the love off her johnny. Maybe she really wanted to go all out but that thought of violating johnnys love and trust was too hard to take so she numbed herself. Was reza absoulutly truthful about that night ..maybe he embellished it a little for johnnnys "benefit". Was Charlie absoulutely truthful about that night...how would she know she was totally out of it..she may not have had the sex (reza imposing his own form of chastity on her) but she could have said what reza said and not remembered.. would have been a helluva hang over...
DeleteThoughts on Tate:
A) hes a part of Rezas plan and is there to make Charlie fall in love with him. Lets face it if you're a guy and even if its a hot chick you seeing abused you dont pack wood. During the abuse he'd have to be questioning his moraility. As is he sported a leaking woody throughout.
So i think he was playing the game.
Or
B) As Jeff said he may have someone else waiting for him and or is possibly under RezaS control as well. Although he was able to push back on reza to settle for a BJ.
Genesis? She cried a little she laughed a little she was all over the emotional chart to me . Maybe shes been in Charlies high heels and still is ......hmmmm Nate and Genesis???? Maybe the making of another series lol..
Btw if you havent read the story yet and are reading all the comments. Then you been SPOILED!
I don't know... I feel like Jonny really loves Charlie and it strikes me that he's willing to take a bullet for her if need be. As for Tate I don't really see that sort of love and I lay with hope that it doesn't end with Tate and Charlie at the end.
DeleteWhy not Tate and that Israeli girl? She seems real hot and has a lot of spirit.
I think johnny and charlie will be fine at the end. Continued relations with tate might be a good thing it would both satisfy charlies big cock issues and Johnnys voyeur issues. I think the way foe Reza to ruin their marriage is to get johnny into another girl...not likely. Hence I think the two are in love and will be a successful hotwife cuckold couple.
DeleteWho knows if Jeff is right about Tate being in the FBI, but that was super interesting. If it's not the case that Tate is some kind of undercover guy, then it's hard to imagine a guy working for Reza and all the shit he does being a good person in any redeemable way. Maybe he's the son of a shady businessman and this is the only life he knows and he wants to go straight if he just finds the nerve to make a change? That's about the only why I think Tate could retain the 'good guy' title, and only barely. This whole situation is fucked, so yeah, to Jeff's point, being a party to these two's torment in a direct way is difficult to reconcile.
DeleteI think Tate's only purpose in this story is to be the part of Reza that Charlie wants to see all the time. Be all the physical traits and powerful alpha personality of Reza with a gentle and caring touch when she needs it, but since he's the bad guy, it's hard to imagine Charlie could ever fall for Tate, unless Charlie becomes the bad guy, then he's the most eligible bachelor of the lot, lol.
I was thinking the reason Tate didn't take his clothes off was to hide the wire he was wearing. Anyway I've been reading and watching TV shows like Monk way too much as of late which makes me realize that it starts to seep into everything else I read and enjoy lol.
DeleteSeems she was eager with Tate and she gave him a handy in the car before but i think the instructions were for something more serious but tate said it was ok for the handy so the bj is actually a progression in there relationship also noted was Rezas and genesis reaction to the BJ. Like it was some degree of success or milestone reached. Perhaps Tates orders were to resist Charlie but allow her to complete her task. But im jaded..so any opinion works there. Reza and johnny dont like one another so is rezas ultimate goal to rip them apart. Tate would be just another weapon in the arsenal. Myabe the gang bang is too..
DeleteAnother theory I had is that Tate is gay. Yes you can get aroused being gay and with a woman. Was he aroused by Reza and looking at his body? I dunno. LOL okay yes it's a bogus theory and KT will probably shoot it down, but it would be the ultimate irony.
DeleteOr KT has us all wrapped around her big Tate....
DeleteRed herring or something
significant?
I felt like he was telling her that she was beautiful, and it wasn't her but rather him...
DeleteOn the Tater being FBI thing, I'm more inclined to go with either DEA, ICE or ATF. Rezas either a drug kingpin (he always seems to have a ready supply of stuff available). Or he's a war dog selling arms and munitions. He also could be trafficking in illegal and/or legal goods but avoiding customs. Which means the IRS is after him for tax evasion..now you know the IRS will get him before anyone else does. Man i wouldnt wanna be in reza's shoes when the alphabet soup comes a knocking.
Delete@ Jeff i have the same problem except its not "monk" I've been binge watching "NCIS" for like 2 weeks now and im finally double digits on season 10..
Five more to go i think.
So question for the KT Klub.... what is your favorite series of hers (knowing this one, and possibly others may not be complete)? Because for me, this is it! This is 🔥 Fire. This pushes those cuck buttons so much, I’m straining against the cage (sorry couldn’t help the reference).
ReplyDeleteThat kiss Charlie had to give Jonny after the BJ? The videos while on vacation? Sex with the headphones “on”? OMG ... just when I think it can’t get hotter , the cage comes off. The angst is just incredible. I love the loss of control Jonny has and how Charlie succumbs to her desires. Reza is the perfect bull-y.
So this is #1 for me. What do you guys think?
Oh yea this is up there not sure if i could call it tops yet but eaxh tale has its own class for me..
DeleteI still think cherry blossoms
Was tops but i also think lhw1 was tops also maggie, also happy endings, cayman...so im all over the place. Angsty wise yea this pretty good.
KT does angst the best IMO.
Mine as well. 100 percent. I love the cuck stuff if it's done right and she does it for me lol. I envy Jonny honestly. Although Jonny should have killed Reza, although it would ruin it.
DeleteReza is another megaworks, but I'm with John, it's going to be hard unseat the place that 'Cherry Blossoms' had me when I was in the midst of it, 'Maggie' is my second favorite for a similar reason. I think LHW1 would have been higher but I wasn't here dying over every status update for the whole thing like the other two I mentioned.
DeleteI would like Reza to find out about Charlie's little antics and have Jonny fit into a smaller or harsher device.
DeleteCharlie does seem to like to do "stuff" out of sight out of mind. Remember thr shaving of the bush..?
Delete@2b2h-
DeleteYea I really fell for Nia and Geoff. I did get emotionally involved with maggie, max and cole.
For lhw1 the reason i list it so high is that tyler really upset me to a degree i cant explain maybe he reminds me too much of someone who bullied me once idk. But he is one charactor that trips my anger nerve. Nut i enjoyed the torture geoff went through too so it was an win angry win for me.
Columbo time: just one more thing... I went back and reread the tate charlie scene. To me it seems that Charlie was really concerned about what Tate thought about her ....also the soul gazing during the blow job, the gentle carress of the cheek post "O" ..is there a there there? ~smoke gets your in eyes~
DeleteWouldnt be surprised if Reza has Tate more involved with charlie from here on...just cuz he wants to unleash Charlies potential and show what quality of a man Charlie deserves. If true..... Ewwww gonna gst messy!
That's just it though, I think Jonny is way stronger than most seem to give him credit for being. He strikes me as someone who would take a bullet for Charlie and wants her to be happy. As for Tate... Sure maybe but I think that she's searching for people to care about her other than just Jonny and feels disgusted in herself.
DeleteBTW I think that Reza drugged Charlie, which explained her irritability and sexual frustration.
Oh and just one more thing. (Columbo voice)
DeleteI think Tate is the coward. What kind of person works under a monster like Reza who has no care for anyone but himself? I think someone with no morals, a coward or on the pay roll of the FBI.
To me Tate may have that kindness but he has no strength, not like Jonny has.
I think Johnny is naive. He took a problem with a simple solution and tried to find something even simpler by pimping out his unwilling wife (the result being anything but simple). All because he was unable to nut up and allow himself to be criticized by Charlie's parents. That seems more like weakness to me and just maybe his scowling around and gritting his teeth is just fluff given his meaningful *resistance. I say this because it's clear to me that Johnny hates what is happening but he can't seem to stop doing nothing. I realize he's working his ass off on his game, but anytime Reza makes a move, Johnny folds like a cheap suit. I'm with you on Nate -- he's a not the good guy he shows himself to be, but if I were to rank the two of them morally, I'd rank Johnny lower.
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I agree that johnny is being a good cuck. That he really does love an will do anything for Charlie...the real question is what will charlie do? There's some truth to what Reza says about Charlie being changed foeever. The how's and what for's still need to be hashed out but big orgasms on big cocks sure she can go back to little johnny, but she will eventually be frustrated and irritable, again, by not enough size or endurance.
DeleteMaybe she and johnmy find away to compensate
But look at how great Jonny's future looks now, he's ditched the Koreans forever, got a professional staff for his game that he has made more progress than ever on creating, and is getting so many luxuries he didn't have before Reza! To say nothing about Charlie's gains.
DeleteMaybe Jonny did make the right choice pimping out Charlie.
;)
To John - FYI, my statement about LHW1 not being as high because I wasn't here fawning over updates was not meant to be an indictment on the story itself, I literally mean I was not here for every update, I think my opinion would change about that story if I was there for the entire story being told in realtime.
DeleteJonny is indeed naive, no arguments here. He makes a lot of dumb mistakes and thinks that he can somehow win this game when Reza has it rigged. As for Tate goes, he runs along with it and unless if he has some reason to do so besides greed I think he's not much better than Reza.
DeleteHer feelings for Tate aren't the same, but maybe in the end Jonny feels that he himself isn't good enough for Charlie and that she deserves someone better?
Of the ones I've read (i.e., the ones available in paperback -- I don't do ebooks), I think her crowning achievement to date is "Cherry Blossoms." I've never before encountered a work of erotica that is so splendidly developed as a legitimate novel at the same time.
DeleteGuess I'll see how more recent series like "Happy Endings" and the "Reza" books compare when KT releases hardcopy collections (as I assume she will at some point).
Thank you! (And did you read the Maggie series yet?—there will be a collected paperback soon if not)
DeleteOh, yes, ma'am, I read the "Maggie" series straight through as soon as all the paperbacks were available. I loved it, as well as "Learning Lessons." I've said several times on here that your unique gifts shine most brightly in these long-form narratives. Your shorter works are great, too (I particularly liked "Watching Natalie Cheat": three characters, one set, one scene -- it's like the world's filthiest single-act play), but when you go long, you're doing things that absolutely no one else does.
DeletePreach, Anon!
DeleteWhat happens if johnnys game totally flops?
ReplyDeleteReza will build a cage in his new place where Jonny can get to work unencumbered at the next one until he gets it all finished. Mutually agreed upon between Charlie and Reza of course ...
Deletewith a tighter device between his legs so he can't cheat of course.
DeleteWhat about the possibilty that externally johnny hates the situation but at a subconscious level its thrilling for him. So at that level he sabotages his own work. Just a thought.
DeleteI think if he fails at the game he loses charlie only so much failure she can take especially cavorting around with rich sucessful studs.
Well... I think he might lose her at some point only to win her back (hopefully) I kind of like those where the husband loses his wife at some point and then does something very noble to win her back.
DeleteI agree with that Jeff. Im pretty sure reza will take charlie away for a weekend or move her in or something and once seperated he'll find a way to split them. So far charlie gets all the perks, the shopping sprees and nice vacation, finest food wines and drugs. And all she has to sacrifice is sex with johnny. Since shes having the biggest orgasms of her life thats not too much of a burden. Johnny gets a couple of programmers and some new equipment.
DeleteMaybe he should ask reza to buy him a penis enlarger..lol.
As computer nerds go im surprised Johnny hasnt found a hotwife website or literotica or something maybe have some books on his kindle from our favorite author.
It also maybe that ita another woman that brings charlie back to her senses. Making her remember that she really loved johnny.
I think Jonny isn't willing even though he enjoys it. That trip actually had me incredibly disturbed and freaked me out some to be honest. I was thinking he would go out to kill the guy even though he wouldn't as it would ruin the whole thing.
DeleteYea but if he wasnt locked up or could watch/participate would it feel the same. I think the not knowing is the torture but charlie willingly giving herself over to a group would turn him on immeasurably. There would be the inevitable "YOU SLUT" argument afterwards but even that would be survivalable through their love.
DeleteI dunno, I think that Jonny has a very deep fear for his wife and is willing to do anything to protect her.
DeleteI get that and Reza is playing that fear to a tee.
DeleteBut Johnny hates it and gets off on it at the same time, as lomg as he feels charlie is in no danger and is not being forced then i think he accepts the situation..of course this is not the desired way to live but its what hes stuck with.
I haven't read that much from you. I have read Pool Party. Cherry Blossoms is on my reading list. But I think this series is a lot kinkier and I love it for it. I miss this side in a lot of the Hotwife\Cuckold books. I'm also fascinated with the world and characters you are building. That is something to strive for in my own books. They are just clicking perfectly into each other. Great writing.
ReplyDeleteBut to get to this book: I feel a lot of love between Jonny and Charlie. A very deep love. It doesn't feel like that is something, that can be broken up. (If Jonny doesn't go into prison for murder. ;-) ) But Reza is definitely onto something with his comment, that Charlie will be changed forever. I think we did see some of it already in this book. First here love for big dicks und sex. I think after the Caribbean she was so moody because she didn’t get fucked. And than there is her “little Jonny”-talk. As much love as she has for him, she also has new needs, which she has to feed or she starts to go crazy.
Can’t wait to read about the next step in their journey.
I was just thinking about that Israeli girl in the book (can't remember her name). Well I think it would be interesting if she came into the picture as more than a programmer. Maybe she comes to the states to meet with Reza and the gang along with Jonny. Something makes me feel that she'd feel a lot more sympathy for Jonny than he realize and might be one of the keys to his freedom.
ReplyDeleteCharlie did seem awfully jealous of the girl.
I think that will be a weapon for reza to break up johnny and charlie. Get johnny involved with another woman. Genesis or someone. Record it and show it to Charlie right before he sends her away for the weekend but with someone who cares about her someone who has a big shoulder to cry on.....Yea that guy. Remember it was charlie who nixt the post cage fuck with genesis. She also nixt the BJ,, but was nice enough to settle for letting him have a handy.
DeleteAnd what a nice guy johnny was. he was ready to go back in the cage without anything because it was upsetting charlie too much..man thats some painful love right there..so if reza gets rid of charlie ie she moves in with him..then has genesis or some other hottie move in with Johnny and allow him a cage time out or hottie has a duplicate key. He will fail. Especially if reza sets up a video feed of charlies bedroom.
Yeah I actually keep getting this idea that it will be Tate (Nate?) that will ultimately convince Charlie to go back to be with Jonny... Not sure why but I still think there is some quality to the guy that isn't the type to steal women away from other men, maybe it happened to him at some time. I dunno maybe wishful thinking on my part.
DeleteIm gonna stick with Tater and genesis being married and under rezas thumb and thats why both got emotional around johnny and charlie a kinda kindred spirit thingy. For the record I am wrong and proudly admit such. 😜
DeleteWorking theory on what Reza's new surprise is.
ReplyDeleteShulamit has been working really hard, understanding a lot about where Jonny's plan is going to go, and Reza gets a call from her one day. "Hey Jonny, check out this really cool demo that Shulamit put together, I think this programmer is really going places!"
"Hey, that's my game!"
Oooh snap! Steals his a woman and his work..i think johmny would likely upgrade from a baseball bat to a bazooka! " hey Reza tack on about a hundred grand to my total" "What for?" ..." oh.. nuttin." Funny thing is he'd be more pissed at losing his game than his wife...probably because thats his out as well as his connection to charlie.
DeleteI like it!
Haha, I think Reza is smarter than that though. Shulamit worked alone, and once Reza finds out Reza plays it off and says, "you picked her, Jonny, you really should be more careful with who you trust. You dont want to be caught with your pants down."
DeleteSounds like everyone on here is predicting murder at the end. Who knows, I'm just hella entertained by this story.
Could be but I feel puzzled why none of KT's characters ever feel suicidal. I mean it's pretty macabre and maybe a little turn offish I guess.
DeleteGreat discussions and thoughts on each of the characters and where this may go. I like the previous comment about how Jonny is a “good cuck”. That is spot on. He absolutely gets off on seeing and watching Charlie with Reza. But the dilemma all cucks face is walking the line between that thrill and the sexual High it causes against the fear and risk of losing your wife.
DeleteJonny heard through the head phones how bad Charlie wanted (NEEDED) to be fucked by Reza and how her entire temperament changed afterwards. So as much as that turned him on, I’m sure it had to heighten his fear. Or at the least , he may start believeing that Charlie will never be the same (which could be true).
But I’m like you guys, always rooting for a way our cuck husband can either keep (or possibly win back, should he lose her) while finding that compromise to allow her to fulfill her sexual needs that be can’t.
Man... I can’t wait for the next installment.
The whole purpose of the game is to bust up the marriage and show charlie her worth in physical and sexual terms. But the game has to have an out an escape clause some means to provide hope. And as the game is played road blocks and forks in the road keep directing them away from the escape route. It would depend if reza is still fucking with them a few years from now then maybe it would be time to seek help.
DeleteAs far as killing reza the other end of the spectrum is johnny and charlie come out ok they realise reza taught them alot about themselves and thank him so much and watch as Reza the hero walks away farting butterflys...
@Lancer - I think the beauty of this story is the doubt that Reza puts in both character's heads about their significant other. You mention that Charlie needed Reza which was why she was so ornery, but I think that was just how Jonny interpreted her actions, when in truth, Charlie just needed physical intimacy and Reza was the only person who could provide it. She would rather it be Jonny, but that isn't an option.
DeleteThat being said, it isn't totally wrong to say that she needed Reza, Reza is slowly but surely carving out his own special place in Charlie's mind, where this situation is causing Charlie to turn to him for things rather than Jonny. And that's starting to be an increasingly pleasant choice for her.
Slowly but surely, Jonny is being replaced because of how Reza has positioned himself.
The more arguments Charlie and Jonny have about how bad Charlie wants Reza, the more Charlie might start to resent Jonny, and the more that fear might start to become true.
The fucked up irony of this story for me isn't that Charlie prefers Reza 'oh woe is me' but rather that Jonny is going to 'oh woe is me' to the point where Charlie prefers Reza.
She'll never love Reza, but the more this situation persists the more Charlie will be dying for normalcy, and with her husband making that more difficult (though not his own fault which adds more layers to this story), Charlie's frustrations become more and more resolved by Reza and she knows it. Reza is the solution to the problem he caused in the first place. She hates that it's true, but she just wants to feel happy again.
@2b2h good points. The fly in the ointment is Tate. Charlie and he have some unspoken connection. The fact that hes kind to her and doesnt overtly want her "in that way", makes her vulnerable to seduction. He's the safe one and its easy to return kindness with ...ahh ..."kindness".
DeleteThe other thing i was thinking about was how Reza is dilluting the marriage. Sowing mistrust and now he knows how much charlie hates for Johnny to be around other women. Yet another weapon in his arsenal. Compromise johnny and reaally watch the fire works. If johnny gets weak ie genesis removes the cage in two weeks while Charlie is out of town. Or some other hottie with bigger boobs than Charlie and sexy as hell yet has that girl next door attitude, and is smart like johnny call her shalimutt or whatever. But someone who is as distracting to johnny as tate might be to Charlie.
I guess your second paragraph is kind of what I'm saying about Reza's effect. Reza is never going to win this race by being legitimate, and Tate I think will have his reputation tarnished by association, but the looming impact Reza will have on Charlie and Jonny might just be how they see each other, and not what Charlie sees in Reza (or Tate). At best Reza or Tate will win by default and the relationship will fail catastrophically.
Delete^^Assuming Charlie and Jonny even break up ...
DeleteI.like the way you put that ..how they see each other. We know reza has been sowing discord and so do the Keens. Wonder if that knowledge helps or hinders..you'd think i'd help but still they had a spat.
DeleteI enjoy the fall as much as the phoenix moment.
I dunno... I guess I'm one of the few that feels that Jonny needs to grow a major spine and work on a way to bring Reza down for revenge like the Count Of Monte Cristo.
DeleteIm in that group too but i want to see that process of melting the metal, pouring it into a mold than laid out on the anvil and hammed into shape then repeatedly heated and hammered until it is finally shaped into Excalibur (oe should I say "excucklibur")
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DeleteBasically I want Jonny to plot a means of destroying Reza because he deserves it. Your right though I also think it shouldn't go past two more books at most. Hoping for happy endings (no pun intended).
DeleteOn a side note regarding 'Separate Schools', I really cannot say enough who amazing is to see another story grow by the day. I hope the ending has revealed itself and for her it's just about getting there!
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Delete... say enough about how amazing it is to see ...*
Another thought on the tate taking the proffered BJ from charlie versus not taking "his turn". The reaction to the evebt from genesis and reza was "wow did you see that?" So my different POV on it isntbabout charlie but about Tates reaction to it. Maybe he had a hardnose no bullshit attitude and charlie melted his icy defense shield. Just food for thought..
ReplyDeleteWe getting close KT?
Will not tell you... The author is like the magician and will never reveal his/her secrets.
DeleteBTW anyone know what Separate Schools is going to be about?
ReplyDeleteKT - when you check in next, would love a two sentence 'non-teaser' teaser to this question.
Deleteohpleaseohpleaseohpleasepleaseplease ....
I’m sensitive to saying too much in case of inadvertent derailment, but it’s really begging to be a series. Young couple going to be apart when they attend different faraway colleges, and you know, whatever, and stuff happens...
DeleteLol! You like how I constantly try to inoculate giving us a teaser? I really try to get you to feel better about morsels. We promise we won't tell!! What if we make a pact to not say any of our thoughts over what you say?
DeleteEveryone promises we won't guess! ;)
Also, when you say that the characters are begging for a series I feel like the Star Wars Emperor when Luke contemplates the dark side, like "yes, yes, I am getting stronger, yes, yes, ignore everything your knowledge about your reader base and writing to Amazon tells, yes!"
KT, the characters might be begging to make a series, are you listening though?
DeleteYeah, but if I do, it might be the biggest, swoopiest one yet.
DeleteWhose on board for an epic tale by KT.....🤓👈this guy thats who....(hope those emojis translate sucks if they come up a bunch o scribbles.)
DeleteMe!
DeleteSounds like either way there's a lot to look forward to! I'm interested to find out the tone of this book.
DeleteI can live with that! As long as we get 6 more Reza books or so! :)
DeleteOk, thinking about it more, does that mean we will be waiting much longer for any 'Separate Schools' related reading? (never asking for specifics)
DeleteDo you mean how long would it be before a second book with Harrison and Taylor?
DeleteIs this is a riddle? Am I dense? lol No, I was just trying to anticipate things based on previous KT behavior (namely what happened to 'Happy Endings') you alluded to a possible series which made me think maybe this 105k novel might possibly be broken up and serialized...
DeleteBased on new information, sounds like you're sending this in its form and maybe there's a sequel maybe.
I dont know, I dont have my KT decoder ring.
I think it would be a good idea to split them into parts... Hard to say but it worked well with Happy Endings and should work nicely with this series I think.
DeleteI prefer the lump sum..and if I could I'd read over KTs shoulder as she writes each word.
DeleteWait, is watching over the shoulder an option? Can I do that too, I'll bring the whisky.
DeleteTwitch channel!
DeleteOn second thought, do we want to be party to the schizophrenic banter of a woman possessed?
DeleteThat might creep me out, actually ...
... just, uh, invite us over when you're done.
Probably for the best!
DeleteOne scene that has really stuck with me is the scene at the department store. Reza makes it VERY clear that he is taking care of Charlie; buying her clothes, parading her around, touching her all in front of Jonny and the sales clerks. He's really pushing his control over both of Jonny and Charlie and I'm sure its pushing Jonny's cuck buttons (it sure did mine). So it continues, Reza is very turned on, he gives Jonny his card to pay and then he makes Charlie meet him in the dressing room where he obviously gets a BJ. Charlie returns, a drop of cum on her collar, etc. But here's what gets me... she came back and kissed Jonny in front of the clerks. Reza didn't (physically) benefit from that kiss, it was entirely to show his control over Charlie (and Jonny). But Charlie willingly did it. This was a VERY strong message. Because to me, just my interpretation, she could have said no. What would be the recourse of she said no? What if she didn't want to? I mean, what more could Reza do if she didn't kiss him? But there was no push back. She did it. And Jonny took it! Proudly! It was an important step BECAUSE, that led to the next step in Jonny's submission. When he was release from the cage, got his handy from Genesis, he gets arouse again, Charlie straddles him and then Reza starts fucking her from behind... Jonny guides him into Charlie (OMG, was that intense or what!!!).
ReplyDeleteSo I put these 2 scenes together. Jonny has now "tasted" Reza and he's touched him, guiding him in. I could NEVER have seen him willingly doing either of those at the beginning of this journey. This sent a strong message, that Jonny has accepted his "role", he will do what Reza/Charlie request of him, AND that it turns him on. Like most cucks, he may regret it after, have those feelings of worry, loss of control, guilt, etc ... but it turns him on and he accepts it.
VERY powerful and VERY symbolic.
You know what really turns me on and I don't understand? Charlie getting jealous whenever any girl shows some kind of interest towards Jonny. Is that pretty weird? Oh and the way she has the key to his chastity device and refuses to unlock it.
DeleteSome many facets to this diamond. Theres the turn johnny into a sub bi boy, turning charlie into a high priced slutty call girl the continued erosion of trust between the keens, the manipulation of both, the instilling of fear and doubt
DeleteInto the maarriage. Decapitating johnnys faith in himself to provide basic needs for charlie. Kind of a biggy as it digs into the pshchology of dependence. Think stockholm syndrome. Im waiting for the flip of charlie when reza stops being the enemy and johnny turns into that funny pain in the ass guy im front of the computer.
you can't turn someone bi or whatever. It's something your born with. Anyway yes Jonny is a sub, but there's also a side to him that will kill or do whatever it takes to protect those he loves, thinking a raccoon backed into a corner with no choice. I think it's going to go that direction.
Delete“I fucking hate you,” he said. “You should, Jonny, you should. Even if, miracle of all miracles, you get your wife back from me, I will have changed her.” “No.” “Oh yes, Jonny. If you can manage to win her back, you’re going to have a woman you will never, ever, ever manage to please. You’ll never fulfill her like I fulfill her. Even with ten million in the bank, little Jonny, you won’t have what it takes to scratch Charlie’s deepest itch. It’s me giving her that tickle, Jonny. It’s me putting that desire in her that you could never meet.” “You’re wrong.” “You can act confident, Jonny, but I can see through it. I know in your heart you see the truth.” Now he leaned forward and gripped Jonny’s knee. “Your little wife took some blow, but I think she smoked weed all day when I was in business meetings. Now that’s a depressed wife, smoking rope all day, all alone. She’s got stuff she wants to escape. I think she was so baked the coke didn’t work on her. Once those men started feeding her whisky and wine she got sloppy. We had to carry her back to the hotel room and Jonny she wanted us but it just wasn’t right. We’re not animals. It was sad really, her laying on the bed begging us to come and join her. I didn’t have the heart to send that to you. Begging for our big dicks, tsk tsk,” he shook his head and clucked his tongue as if recalling a tragic scene. “Bull. Shit.” “It’s true. It’s a boner killer when a girl gets like that. Pathetic. Too hungry, Jonny. It’s a turn off.” “You’re such a liar.” “Am I?” he said with a sneer. In a soft and breathy Charlie imitation, Reza panted, “Who wants to fuck me first?” He even made his eyes go glassy and drunk-looking. “Fuck you. If she did that you would send me the video.” “I couldn’t film it, Jonny. I put the camera down. I don’t like you, but I care about Charlie. Iwouldn’t film her like that. I felt bad. She must be going through a lot. You know. Inside her brain. Wondering how she fucked up so bad, getting into this situation. But then, like, knowing it’s actually your fault. Wondering, beginning to doubt the faith she has in you. She had a lot of fun with me and those guys, you know, before she passed out. That’s what her life could be like if she wasn’t weighed down by the bricks you tied to her.”
ReplyDeleteCouple things in this pasaage .
1) if you get your wife back from me.
So in rezas mind Charlie is his already which contractually is accurate but i dont think thats what he was saying i think reza feels charlie has fallen foe him oe at least his dick..
2) working on Johnnys faith in himself and in the strength of his marriage . Suggesting that charlie wamts more than him more than he can provide. Upper cuts him right in his male ego. That he cant provide charlie with the simple basic sexual need. Even with all the money. He still be second fiddle to reza.
3) declares he "cares" about charlie. So is reza falling for "pretty charlie"
The last statement about johnny weighing charlie down/holding her back seem aimed at getting johnny to let charlie go...if he keeps working that button when charlie finally releases johnny from his cage permantly will be as a farewell present.
John, that whole scene (Charlie coming home mad, Reza and Jonny talking) was absolute gold for me, might be my favorite scene in the whole entire series.
DeleteI agree John C and TBTH... WOW. This was SO powerful. Now keep in mind, Reza COULD have been lying about what happened on their trip. But I honestly don't believe he was. I really do think Charlie was just as Reza described it to Jonny. I think she smoked weed, I think she snorted blow and when she (or anyone for that matter) gets in that state, their guard is down and who knows what they'd be capable of saying or doing.
DeleteI also agree with Reza that Charlie will be changed. I think Charlie does, and always will, love Jonnny. But sexually, she's changed. She NEEDS Reza's big cock. We saw that, we heard her BEG for him after not having him for so long. We saw how her mood and temperament was.
I hope this ends well for Charlie and Jonny, with some kind of compromise; that they stay together (even if it means a falling apart), but that Jonny can accept his role as a cuckold and still allow Charlie to get her sexual needs fulfilled by a bull in a way that doesn't force them apart.
But is it realistic?
I think she's getting addicted to coke and other drugs and it's leading to the path of ruin. Everyone keeps saying leaving Jonny, what about at some point Jonny has had enough of everything after Charlie betrays him in a horrible way?
DeleteI firmly believe that Jonny will win her back or they will find each other again and I'll get my hopefully happy ending.
I do too jeff but i think there will be that ultimate break up.. than after sometime maybe Tate will reveal something that forces johnny to go on the offense or prehaps genesis feels bad about breaking them up and schemes to bring them back together.. but that discussion with reza and the post trip attitude of charlie was real..the reasons maybe fuzzy but when you had the chance to get some and dont than have to go without your favorite thing that plays on attitude..im
Deletestill thinking charlie is going through some sort of stockholm syndrome and will totally flip against johnny " i dont need you and your stupid accusations johnny or your dumb game, i have a real man who gives me everything and makes me feel alive!"
Then im looking forward to when Johnny makes the game its a huge sucess he finds abetter lawyer than rezas and sues for total control of his products. Puts Reza out of business has ths hottest chicks on his arm.. making charlie totally confused and jealous "why do I care johnny is yesterdays news? All we ever did for fun was watch twilight zone" then bing ....regret and realization of the love they shared she wakes up and works to get him back. Of course theres all the sex in between.
Of course this is just one of a million out comes. Somebody could get hit by a car or charlie gets hooked and becomes a crack whore, reza xould be taken out by a rival etc etc
This just has the feel that the two will be together in he end ...but as always as long as the end makes sense and iant forces either to be together or apart im good with it. Ive read several stories that made better sense that the couple end up split. So not counting chickens just yet.
@ lancer: charlie is already changed she changed when she was doing things for reza without telling johnny (shaving of the beaver) . Then shes begging for reza to bone her but didnt want Johnny to know she wanted it. Would that prove reza right about the trip? So reza has already proven right about her changing but the question is how much further can she be changed and still be her..
DeleteAnother thought I've had. KT mentions in her synopsis that Reza is always one step ahead of Jonny. I think Reza methodically took Charlie shopping, bought her expensive clothes, made her feel extremely sexy and constantly tells her how beautiful she is and how she deserves better. Then he METHODICALLY takes her on this trip and shuns her. He gets her high, coked out, and drunk. He METHODICALLY allows these other guys to dance with her, flirt with her, give her attention, but then WON'T let them fuck her. He doesn't fuck her on vacation. He brings her back, and doesn't fuck her for days.
DeletePoint being... he conditioned her to want him. To crave him. To beg for his sex. So to KT's point, he is one step ahead. He may have started this game out by "forcing" or "blackmailing" Charlie into doing what she had to do, but now she WANTS it. She BEGS for it. She NEEDS it. Reza told Jonny she will be forever changed when he is done with her. This is how he has done it. It was by design. He's got Charlie now. She may say she loves Jonny, but Reza gives her everything else she wants AND needs. I can't WAIT to find out how she stop this train, IF she can. Reza could write the book for "101 ways to steal your wife". He's got the blueprint.
@2b2h:
DeleteYea i.loved that passage and the following scene. First their was the talk than there was the proof. Reza had to know johnny was listening even with head phones on.. hes not that stupid so the scene was designed to prove what he said about chalire on the trip right. Whether he lied or not.
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DeleteExactly. And @JohnC, to your point earlier that she's doing things without telling Jonny, this scene is a perfect example of that. She told Jonny to put the head phones on so he wouldn't hear what she was going to tell Reza. Despite the fact it's in front of his face (or with his back turned), she doesn't want him to hear what she needs. Again, it's meant to be without his knowledge.
DeleteMaybe, or maybe Charlie asked Jonny to put on headphones because she didn't want to say anything that might make Jonny, you know, uncomfortable, downstairs. Talking about needing to get fucked gets her little cuck hubby flustered. Dont want to make it difficult on the poor guy!
DeleteBut I have to think Reza knew he was paying attention, and so did Charlie, I think that's why the reveal that he knew about garnered little reaction from her. If she knew he was watching, and knew he was probably eavesdropping is it really doing anything behind his back?
DeleteShe may have made that a little bit of a secret for the opposite reason instead, to turn him on. Hmm.
Thats ..a really good point....
DeleteI just agree that there's no way the three go from talking to "Jonny turn around" and Jonny just says, "ok I won't pay attention for the next ten minutes and wonder at all if the conversation that Charlie wants to have with Reza has been finished" lol.
DeleteIt was hot thinking that Charlie wanted to do all that behind Jonny's back, trust me, I just think they all knew what was happening at some level, at least.
Maybe that isn't what you're saying though, it's still possible that Charlie knew eventually Jonny was going to glance over and find them fucking, but she was hoping to clear the hurdle where he might hear how much she wanted his attention down in the Caribbean and since they came back. I can't imagine that particular part of conversation is part of the cuck game she might or might not want to play with Jonny, but maybe it is!
Team KT.... just a reminder that we all need to go out and rate this book. It will really help drive sales and get the word out for KT. IT might even help encourage KT to write the next installment of this book next (hint hint KT!).
ReplyDeleteAnd to you KT... this book (and most of your work for that matter) still do not come up if you search for key word "cuckold" or "hotwife" in Amazon Kindle. It used to until several months back. I'm not sure what changed in Amazon, but it would have to have a negative influence on your ability to gets sales or your work and needed "advertisement" or at least notification/recognition of this book (and all of your work) within this genre. Somehow it's not being "tagged" as other books seem to be. I'm not sure if you're aware of that or not or if you have an ability to get Amazon to include this book when fans of this genre are randomly searching for these types of books to read, but it seems somehow this needs to be fixed!
Concur. I reviewed this one but gotta go back an do the others ive read.
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DeleteI remember hating Genesis from the last book in many ways, but sense then I've grown to like her. I hope she opens her eyes about Reza the manipulative bastard.
ReplyDeleteI think that an outside influence will be required to fix things..could be darious could be someone else. IDK who but someone will.
DeleteI dunno maybe he needs to lose Charlie so he can find himself and win her back? Just some thoughts. Another thought is he's gets a heart attack or a near hit and has to go the hospital. It's feasible the way he works tirelessly, non-stop.
DeleteI also think/feel that he needs to stop playing Reza's game and create his own game to fuck the bastard up.
DeleteHes supposed to be a smart programmer but has he spent anytime hacking into any of rezas stuff or has he no access. Bet that mossad agent posing as a programmer can gain access.
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DeleteWell Hacking and Programming are totally different things although you can do both it's not normal. I've been thinking of the next installment and I have to say I agree with most of the comments on here. I think that Charlie and Jonny in a sense need to break up so they can find themselves again and I do believe they will.
DeleteI theorize that Jonny is going to get very successful in this game and him and that Sharoam? Israeli gal will form a partnership and they proceed to do pretty damn good. Charlie's not doing so hot, Reza has her hooked on drugs and is pimping her (Reza isn't going to allow Tate to do shit, it's Reza pulling the strings and he owns those guys as much as he owns Jonny and Charlie).
Reza won Charlie but he grows bored and abusive towards her, controlling her like property. Genesis comes into the picture as she dislikes the way that Reza is treating her and tries to get into contact with Jonny in which she finds Jonny as he's really successful
I think the Israeli girl trains Jonny in martial arts and helps build his confidence up, reassuring him that size isn't his issue and she gives him a lot of pointers on how to please a woman.
Anyway I think Jonny can't just win Charlie back by buying themselves out of it. The whole prospect is a guarantee failure because Jonny doesn't respect himself as a man and neither does Charlie for that matter. That doesn't mean she doesn't love Jonny or vice versa, they are filled with their own insecurities and fears that makes them more alike than they realize.
@JeffB - I agree, they need to break up first to find themselves. My theory is that there will be something that pushes Jonny over the edge. Maybe Reza makes Jonny start cleaning Charlie up after he uses her? Maybe he starts making Jonny wear her panties over the cage? Maybe he witnesses Charlie gravitating towards Tate as we saw towards the end of this book? Whatever it is, I think it will turn Jonny on beyond his control during his next release date, but then after his release (however Reza allow that to happen), he gets an overwhelming emotion. When you're not turned on anymore after release (you guys know how that goes), he's going to be flooded with shame, guilt, sense of loss, not feeling loved, etc. and I think he runs. Charlie will feel he's left her, give up on her emasculated husband (at least temporarily) while she either stays with Reza or Tate (or both). And my prediction is Jonny does find himself; he becomes successful, he pays back his debt, gains his confidence. But he never stops loving Charlie, even if he ends up with the Israeli girl or Genesis for a time.
DeleteBut at his core, he loves Charlie. And he is a cuckold. Reza finally tires of Charlie, she comes begging back to Jonny. He takes her back and love wins. But in the epilogue, Charlie puts his cage back on Jonny on the weekends, Jonny willingly lets her, while Tate comes over to satisfy her needs in front of Jonny. When she's done, she lets him out and rewards him for loving her and letting her having her needs met under her terms.
Can't wait!!!
I noticed Reza's 'charms' didn't work at all on Jonny's Israeli co-worker. But yeah I would like to see it win as well, but I don't think Jonny has any belief in himself, that he really isn't good enough for Charlie like Reza says. It's going to take someone to convince him that it's not true and I don't think it can be Charlie as she's belittled her husband as much as possible.
DeleteInteresting scenarios, wonder how KT will wow us.
DeleteMaybe reza ensnares momma charlie ....yikes!
That would end the game pretty quick. "Hey johnny remember when i joked about giving your MIL the key....well its not a joke anymore."
What i find interesting is that for almost all of this the Keen's have been keen to follow whateve reza says. And yet he still tortures them wonder what he'd do if they openly rebelled. How would he punish them?
Yeah, I'm not a whole fan of the pregnancy angle but I can see it. I guess I really don't like it going that route in this story. Some stories I get massively turned on by it but for this one I think it will just turn me off.
DeleteThis brings to mind Reza's real goal. His real goal I think isn't to steal Charlie because he 'can' (to me this is a pretty stupid motive and isn't KT's style in I think), but rather because he wants to sell her. Everyone around Reza are pawns (Tate, Genesis, Jonny obviously, Charlie, etc.) I think he's particularly vile and rotten in some ways worse than Roco.
This guy has absolutely no intention of Tate to get her. Why would he do that when he could sell her to the highest bidder. I guess he could just simply do it at anytime? Well I think he gets sadistic pleasure out of torturing Jonny and Charlie is the perfect weapon to do so. Charlie means absolutely nothing to Reza and as far as Tate goes, he's not as good as he appears to be (snicker? maybe a simple lapse of judgement but I really don't believe so because why would a good guy work under such a monster? Is he really stupid enough to believe that Reza's alright after all those antics? I think not)
Jonny's naive and foolish in many ways, inexperienced in the world and pretty much the mirror of Charlie. I think that Jonny is going to go through some major changes in the next couple of books or whatever is left.
I even have a solid title figured out if I was writing the finale: "Jonny's Gambit"
Anyway Just wanted to add my two cents. Hoping for a happy ending rather one that leaves me depressed for weeks on end and desiring to take a cold shower.
Yea i dont think reza wants her pregnant that would mess up the hottie on his arm look. If he did decide to do that hed go IR not to do the whole qos or bbc slave thing . The purpose would be to prove that charlie was unfaithful and johnny knew about it. Having mixed race baby would be the final humiliation.
DeleteIdk about charlie being sold off.. i think if anything reza would put her in a gilded cage. Lock her up for his own personal use he might share her from time to time with his closests buds. But i dont see her being put up for auction...just my opinion though.
Interesting takes. I see things a little different with how Reza perceives Charlie. While I definitely wouldn't go so far as to say he loves her, I do think he cares about her quite a bit. He's constantly telling her how beautiful she is, that she deserves better than Jonny, and while he has no problem "sharing" her or letting others use her (which I think he does because the control component is what turns HIM on), he also wouldn't let the 3 guys on vacation take advantage of her when she was sloppy drunk and high (allegedly). That to me was protecting her when she was vulnerable. I actually DO think he wants to take her from Jonny. Now, he may get bored of her quickly or move on to another girl... this book has evolved over months and months, right? And we don't know that he's seeing any other girls on the side. Maybe Genesis, but we don't know that. While I'm also not a turned on by the hot wife BEING pregnant, the RISK that she could become pregnant by her bull is a huge turn on to me. Maybe that's his next sadistic torture of Jonny; he threatens to get her pregnant, has sex with her when she's at her most fertile time, and then makes Jonny "clean her" to stop her from getting pregnant? In any case, I think he's got feelings for Charlie and she means more to him than just a pawn in his game of life.
DeleteReza's always telling Charlie those things to get her confidence up and to hurt Jonny and make him feel like he's less than a man. His reasoning for not having those guys take advantage of her which they did and Reza grabbing Charlie's pussy while mouthing words while she's unconscious was absolutely disgusting and far from erotic.
DeleteI think Reza's using her as a means to an end, but am willing to think that he has some small amount of emotions to Charlie. While his main goal here is to prep Charlie's confidence up and destroy Jonny's.
You are correct we don't know that he's seeing other girls at the side. He may not be at the moment, I think he is involved with a lot of illegal activity which is why he's out a lot and doesn't return for periods of time. Charlie has Jonny as company and how lonely will it get for Charlie when she no longer has that? How bad will things get for her when she loses Jonny which really is the only one she really truly loves?
I guess we'll have to wait and see whenever the next book comes out.
Any maybe we can corner KT one weekend when this series is done (hopefully it continues for a long time) and get her insight and feedback on how she perceived Reza's intentions and emotions were, behind the scenes !
DeleteAside from a few illicit drugs. Has Reza said anything about his occupation? We know he owns johnny and charlies apartment complex .....so maybe hes not as criminal as we expect. Just a rich real estate guy. Buying and selling properties..
DeleteRezas relationship with charlie:
He started off with one a month then escalated and escalated with charlie.. cant help feel that he's growing some sort of affections to her. But im not sure if he loves the game better. He seems to hate johnny and maybe thats because he thinks johnny unworthy of charlie and keeps pushing her to do more nasties and with each one has that omg moment when he thinks "i cant believe he lets me do these things" making johnny even more reprehensible..maybe johnny begging him to keep charlie safe on the trip was a sense of hope for johnny. So nothing happened because of it. Or maybe this is all hooey and Reza is the evil bastard we all come to know and love.
Well we know it's more than just drugs, what Reza's doing to Charlie and Jonny is actually illegal. Asking for services like I'll forgive your debt if I can have sex with your wife, etc. I believe that's pretty much against the law. So that brings to mind that Reza skirts the law as much as he can and is probably friends with a number of shadowy characters.
DeleteWhere they went on that trip looked really seedy. Drugging her up which I am convinced that Charlie is completely and utterly wrong, certain drugs can make you forget who you slept with the prior day. Alcohol being one common example but a number of other ones can do it. I also think she did more than just weed although irritability can be a side effect of that as well.
I think there are sides to Reza that can give people the illusion that he actually cares like a sociopath can pretend to care. His reasoning for complimenting Charlie with empty compliments and ways to put Jonny down are out right manipulations. Anyone who thinks otherwise needs to read it closer.
He's telling her to stroke her ego, perhaps he isn't trying to make her a prostitute but rather just his plaything. This spells tragedy for Jonny and Charlie as they are both making a lot of mistakes and are equally naive.
"Asking for services like I'll forgive your debt if I can have sex with your wife, etc. I believe that's pretty much against the law. "
Delete"like a sociopath can pretend to care"
"complimenting Charlie with empty compliments"
OH MY UNHOLY FUCK!!!
I GOT IT I KNOW WHAT REZA IS!!!!
A FREAKING POLITICIAN!!!
Lol!
DeleteExcellent deduction, John. Sincerity is everything in politics, and if you can fake that, you've got it made!
Delete"Aside from a few illicit drugs. Has Reza said anything about his occupation?" Well besides breaking every landlord laws in the book that could see him in possibly and facing steep fines, not much. I think he's a criminal and a slime ball.
DeleteHe owns a gym and trains boxers so there's that, which I completely forgot about until I saw Libertyne's recent review. Makes the comment 'stop by to the gym' by Reza to Jonny much more intriguing at the end of 'Away Game.''
DeleteActually I think he trains MMA fighters or at least it's suggested as such. Maybe he uses this moment as a way to get Jonny into it which Jonny loses badly to Reza and other fighters in front of Charlie. Perhaps this makes him better more badass overtime though.
DeleteSO ... next question I've been thinking about this weekend; Why do you think Reza wants Jonny to meet him at 1pm at the gym? Any guesses on what he's up to, or why? It obviously has to be something "devious". It's also taking away time that Jonny could be programming. But did you catch that Jonny didn't tell Charlie about Reza's text? So Charlie doesn't know that Reza wants Jonny at the gym.
ReplyDeleteIt could be something fairly tame, at least as it's presented. Maybe he just advises Jonny he needs to do something outside the apartment for his mental state so he offers to let Jonny work out with him at the gym as a stress relief; but then makes Jonny shower at the gym in front of other guys while he's wearing a cage. It would be another opportunity for Reza's to control and humiliate Jonny.
Maybe Jonny gets there only to enter and find out that Charlie is working out with Tate every day at the lunch hour and she hasn't been telling Charlie. And it's another example of Charlie "wanting" to be with Tate. Reza knows it's been happening and it's his way of further driving a wedge between Jonny and Charlie?
Oh I think so for sure. Personally I think Reza has no intention letting Charlie hookup with anyone but Reza though. Honestly I feel too horrible for Jonny to get turned on much by this story, well I do get excited but I also feel like it gets to be too much at times. I want to see them together, but I think Jonny has lost all respect for himself no matter what he's trying to do to assure himself that he's good. I think he's starting to crack and is losing trust in Charlie which seems pretty justified to me.
DeleteOnce Reza has Charlie though he's going to ruin her. No I don't think Tate is going to save her because Tate is nothing but a guy going on for the ride.
I think its a show of force. Reza will take the opportunity to display all his big guns. Not only pumping iron with all his muscle bound buds but in the shower with Johnny being having the shortest straw the next shortest being twice as big at a minimum. Somewhere in there Reza would take johnny into a room either a surveillance room or a room with a two way mirror where he sees charlie tate or genesis getting her "work out".
Delete"Ok charlie now use your muscles to squeezee out the ping pong ball"
I had another idea is that he plans on taking them to a clothing optional beach for the week. This time with Charlie and Jonny...
Delete@Jeff B... holy hell that would be next level. Maybe walk the beach holding hands with Reza and having Jonny keep 5 steps behind locked in his cage. Man , that is a hot scene ....
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DeleteIt's been a huge fantasy of mine... Now I'm almost afraid to see it happen to Jonny because I'm beginning to feel way too much for him. Guilty of falling for the characters too much. It sucks though because I'm beginning to dislike Charlie more and more as it rolls on.
Delete@lancer- Something i just thought of that you mentioned. Johnny didnt tell charlie about the meeting and charlie.didnt tell johnny about the lunches and the shaving etc. Eventually she did but not when they occured so Reza has them keeping secrets from one another. That will chew at their trust for one another. And we see the proof when they begin to trust rezas word over each others.
DeleteOf course, I think Reza's turning them against each other. His whole plan is to destroy their relationship so he can get Charlie to himself to hell with anyone else.
DeleteI've been thinking about this series a little obsessively at times and I remember someone asking how Reza is a criminal besides those illegal drugs. Well everything he's done thus far is completely illegal, asking for sexual favors for rent is actually against the law. Also whatever contract Reza had Jonny sign was actually automatically voided due to the living situation he has Jonny live in (chastity, Reza sleeping with Jonny's wife, etc). All this amounts to is that the contract means nothing and that Jonny has no legal responsibility to pay Reza a dime for anything. As a matter of fact with all the video evidence that has been surfacing such as taping them in the bedroom if Reza is actually keeping tabs on them is a violation of the law, illegal wiretapping.
ReplyDeleteEssentially this game Reza's made is nothing but smoke and mirrors and the real tragedy is that Jonny and Charlie are too caught up to realize it. They have Stockholm syndrome which means they are both victims. Hope it turns on the bastard.
Wow-- I got in here a bit late... I will say, Reza has to be pretty stupid. IT anti-hacking specialists all say the last thing you want to do is tick off a really good software creator. They have sooo many ways to hurt you, no matter how tough you may be. You wake up one morning and all your assets are gone, who even knows where? And worst of all for a guy like Reza, you appear on the Government's Terrorist watch list. I wonder how much scrutiny Reza's business could take?
ReplyDeleteMaybe Tate will join up with Jonny and share Charlie. She could have the best of both world's, after Tate takes out the trash (Reza).
Guhrka
Guhrka ... excellent thought. Maybe that’s the “game” Jonny is playing. He ruins Reza financially through his ability to hack. Completely turns the tables and short of his big dick, he’s got nothing to hold over them any longer.
DeleteJust a thought, I don't think Jonny has hacking skills but I am willing to bet he knows people who do. I think it's going to take a team to take Reza down and people within that turn on the guy Genesis and possibly Tate. More or less he needs to grow a spine and find a way to defeat him within the law which should be easy to do.
DeletePS. Jonny was contemplating murdering Reza which shows that he is slipping to a much darker/uglier place.
DeleteBet shia or javid could hack..also Johnny doesnt seem to think things out very well. His reaction to get a bat and do what with it? does reza have cameras like charlie fears in their apt.? If he does and johnny actually managed to strike Reza dead ..now whats the plan? ..run? Confess go to jail for cap 1 murder premeditated? Loses charlie that way too.
DeleteOr fails in his atrack and is thus removed from the
equation by his own failed plan.
@gurk- i agree with the tate scenario something for everyone there.
@ lancer- i like that idea but i dont get that evil vibe from johnny he may not be a choir boy after all he did screw over the koreans.
I just dont think he is corrupted enough to do it on his own ..maybe if his little helpers push him like shia or javid tell him they know whats going and just say the word and they will turn Rezas world upaide down. Now that kind of preassure over a period of time might convince him.
Well no, Jonny isn't a master strategist or anything because if he was he would know the game is rigged. He's young and foolish, thinking that he can somehow win this game and win Charlie back (somebody he doesn't need to win back). Jonny needs to find himself and swallow his pride as it's been his undoing.
DeleteAs for killing Reza, I don't think that's something that is in Jonny to do. I think however if he's being pushed in that direction hard enough to protect those he loves he'll do it. As for losing Charlie over it, well when it gets to that point that he's already lost her then yes I think it could put him over the edge. BTW Reza has no legal sway whatsoever for Jonny to pay him anything.
I'm hoping that Jonny will find himself if that happens and he'll bring Reza down.
Technically the legal sway would be that the keens violated a the terms of their lease. They havent paid rent in how long? But the kindly building owner was nice enough to let them stay until johnnys program is finished. But he could file suit for eviction at anytime he may have already signed documents and maybe with johnnys signature. (Did he really read all those documents).
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DeleteSorry, Reza actually can't offer to have sex with Jonny's wife to pay in place of rent. It's basically extortion and Reza utilizing his power as a landlord like that is a gross abuse of power and would guarantee he could never work as a landlord anywhere, I looked it up. Also you can't just come over whenever you will as a landlord. Reza has been pretty much been breaking the law.
DeletePlaying devils advocate here.
DeleteReza says the sex was consensual and not a play for pay. She seduced him and with some careful editing (After all if there are videos reza has them) the videos could be made to look like charlie wanted it. She did beg. The other part is this has been on going so now you get into evolving relationships as a legal escape. The fact that the husband was aware and ok with it makes things harder.. Oh you mean he wasn't ok with it....prove it.
Oh no another problem for the Keen's Johnny went into business with Reza "just look at these signed documents your honor"
I agree with you what hes doing is illegal and just plain wrong, but it will be tough to prove especially if reza has recordings of verbal agreements.
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DeleteUmmm, it doesn't matter whether the sex was consensual or not. It's against landlord policy to have sex with tenants to for rent, it's still considered extortion and thus completely illegal. Whether things were agreed or not what Reza is doing would be against the law.
DeleteWell anyway I've been wondering if we'll know soon what Separate Schools is going to be about? It's 100k now which is pretty damn long. Makes me eager to find out.
ReplyDeleteI am interested as well. But I also hope the next installment of Reza is the book to follow Separate schools. 🙄
ReplyDeleteI hope so as well
DeleteAlso I would like to see Jonny set out for revenge and Reza eventually falls. Not this next book necessary are but at the end point.
DeleteI always thought the saying
ReplyDelete"The bigger they come the harder they fall" had a deeper philosophical meaning..
Now with Reza I've learned it just means the bigger he cums the harder he falls asleep.
Now that i think of it so do I...
After Jonny finally mans up and gets rid of Reza, doesn't our international man of mystery need to be introduced to the Mapplethorpes? Or in another alternative universe, Reza tries to move in on Maggie after Cole is banished to a foreign office; she is intrigued, of course, and Carol must sic the Hong Kong triads on Reza's Middle East mafia.
ReplyDeleteAs far as I can see after going through another reread I think that Jonny's cuckolding is about to get worse. Perhaps a new chastity cage and maybe having to eating creampies? Am looking forward to the next book even though it may take 3 months or so like this one did.
ReplyDeleteHa ... KT’d character worlds collide!
ReplyDeleteSo I have (still) been thinking about our poor Jonny in his cage and think he has even further to “fall” before he reaches his breaking point. As I think about the months that have evolved and the further into submission to Reza he has fallen, I think he goes even deeper. He’s fighting this constant battle from within because each step along the way greatly turns him (and us!) on... so there is he constant love/hate on what he is doing.
Reza has him in a cage, accepting snowball sloppy second kisses from a Charlie and now he’s actually guiding Reza into Charlie. But he’s not been “exposed” as a caged cuckold in public beyond Reza’s entourage. And how long before he willingly “cleans” Charlie as well. These are just a couple of things that come to mind, obviously there are many more, that may happen before I think Jonny breaks.
well I could envision 3 more books or so with maybe the last book having less erotic/cuckolding stuff in it. Who knows though what KT is thinking.
DeleteI love the idea of creampie and possibly Charlie getting into humiliating her husband. Maybe that's the breaking point for Jonny as he seeks comfort from another such as Genesis or some other woman. Maybe he escapes and gets family to help him. My main interest though is the whole leading up to this.
@lancer
DeleteReza did suggest to charlie that use of the cage could reduce johnnys stature ..
So im going with reza ruining johnnys next release date in one form or another..
@jeff
Alot of kts books even though they have an ending could continue on and on and on and id be a happy reader if they did.
Much like xleglovers mike and jen tale starting with hfmg and semi ending with cheaters and rivals (i think there was a mention of another continuation story after C&R). That was one long ass story.
I would like to see this story arch go for at least 3 to 4 books. Maybe a continuation story arch would be nice.
DeleteAnyway I think that my idea of a new cage is becoming a distinct possibility as Reza finds out about the little escapade between Charlie and Jonny. Mayhaps one where he can't so easily masturbate in? Waiting a month and instead of masturbations he gets milked so he gets this horrible ruined orgasm?
Either way I agree it could go longer and should, but I guess we'll have to see what will happen. KT hasn't updated us much on the Separate Schools book and I imagine that she might be dealing with some other issues in her life.
@ JohnC and @John B - Great points. With Jonny's Cage, whether he actually gets smaller or not at this point may not even be relevant; it's been thrown out there in the universe so at the very least, Jonny (and Charlie) are probably at least "thinking" that it may. And I also agree that Reza is likely watching and on to Charlie and Jonny's milking escapade. And that's another reason that Reza may want to see Jonny at the gym at 1:00pm; it needs to be addressed and punished?
DeleteAnd I am also hoping for at least another 3-4 books. Ruined orgasms, creampies, smaller cages, longer times between his releases..... OHHHH the possibilities.
I like what I'm hearing... I just thought of an idea though where Reza has him taking these pills that make him smaller only he sells it as a vitamins or performance enhancing stuff when in reality it's not. All the things you listed would be great.
DeleteAs far as punishing johnny for his premature release. The new cage upgrade would be the catheter type not only curves but plugs.
DeleteOooouuuccchhheeee!!!
hard to envision that whole catheter type device... Perhaps goes too far? An interesting idea nonetheless though.
Delete... And so the hype begins ...
ReplyDeleteOh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit
DeleteI just love this concept, it sounds like it's high school sweethearts. Seriously impressed by KT's original work when it comes to cover design too, it seems like people like to use a lot of the same stock photographs for their covers and KT does a little extra finding things that are unique and not stepping on other writers' toes and careful about what the cover is saying about her stories.
DeleteThen add to the fact that she throws in details like what appears to be something written in a yearbook and I be like, dang.
@ 2b2h
DeleteCouldnt agree more on the covers..it was them legs on lhw1 that got me hooked in the first place. And i dont care how well she discribes charlie in the reza series. I just see in my minds eye that cover girl when I think of her.
Of course Nia with the kohl dark eye makeup . A great writer with an eye for relatable covers....
If i remember it right.
Lhw1 cover was based on that tyler and jess first romp was in the back of the mini van hence the legs over the carseat.
Lhw2 to me that represented Nia at the hotel with rocko the first time she was decked out to seduce him but he just took her.
Charlie reminds me of an old song ..."im only a bird in a gilded cage" sitting in the window with rezas dress shirt and a pair of sexy panties.(who allowed that)
Ah, memories. Of minivan and hotel romps ...
DeleteIs it weird to get nostalgic about books about cheating ...
... yes, ok, just checking.
I'm hoping separate schools is as good as it looks!
Delete@2b2h
DeleteNostalgic or just in the mood?
@jeff
Kam'on dis is KT we're tawlkin bout. Its gonna be hot or ima get tyler and rocko to u know .....budah boom , badah bing...
(This post inspired by cousin from NY.
"Ehhh...how bout dem Giants?")
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ReplyDeleteOne thought that has come to mind about Jonny is that now that he knows he can 'cheat' in the device, Reza will have to tighten some rules as I'm sure he knows all about this. Maybe he does get a new chastity device. I read about one where it involves piercings and it keeps the device in place making it pretty much impossible to 'cheat.' Just a thought.
ReplyDeleteIf its rezas purpose to take charlie away from johnny, I don't think he has far to go...he essentially has her already all he has to do is just keep going the way he is. Until Charlie realizes she doesn't really need johnny anymore...then as that Reza/Charlie relationship developes they involve johnny less and less until hes just a memmory. Once charlie is fully involved with Reza she'll realize theres no future in it ...sure the sex and buying stuff is awesome but he isnt filling the other hole very well...no not the ass,...no not the mouth... the hole in her heart.. does Reza even know what "the twilight zone" is?
ReplyDeleteMy thinking is that might happen so Jonny can find himself. But man... that just kills the series for me.
DeleteI had another angst Reza could put Jonny through. Could you imagine if Reza made Charlie give Jonny a viagra while he’s caged? And then force him to watch and listen to Charlie beg....
DeleteOr trick Jonny in taking Viagra without knowing it. I imagine Reza has that kind of cruel streak to him. My thinking the next book wont be out for 4 months.
DeleteTrue, I could see Reza tricking Jonny into that. But I think it would be hotter if Charlie did it (like how she was the one that initially put the cage on Jonny). It's another example of Reza exerting his control and Charlie complying, and Jonny caught fighting that internal cuck battle.
DeleteI agree... I like the idea of Reza coaxing Charlie into doing things and maybe even having some ideas of her own to punish her cuckold husband Jonny. In the meantime Jonny growing sullen and at some point resistant, but powerless. Although I think at some point I want Jonny to develop a spine. I like the idea of wimpy characters becoming stronger and eventually growing spines.
DeleteMaybe reza switches things up a bit. Leaves charlie at home and takes johnny out ...nice steak dinner, a little social time a coupke hours later takes johnny to a strip club and sets up in a vip aka blue room with mirrored floor to ceiling windows.
Delete"Now for her debut set the lovely and talented and super hot, charise...." out struts charlie in her strip wear. Stockings clear plastic heels,lacy panties and bra with sheer teddy over top. All in virginal white...
Now we know what the work out regime was for ...
Like that idea... Especially him in his chastity cage. Give him a lap dance by one of the girls to piss Charlie off.
DeleteThat's hot! But.... we all know that KT is the master at coming up with these scenarios. We're just amateurs "fantasizing" about playing in the big leagues. ;)
Deleteof course... It would be great if Charlie kept Jonny's key on her anklet, Jonny helps her get dressed for her date with Reza.
DeleteHope you're doing well KT. You've got a big fan club here that checks this blog daily....
ReplyDeleteMay the most dirty of thoughts guide your fingertips, KT!
DeleteKT's been here replying to earlier posts. I'm glad to note that I'm not the only one that checks daily or actually should I say a lot during the day lol.
DeleteUt....oh.. Leg wear fans beware.
ReplyDeleteHoney and i were looking to get something sexy for some just us times. So she got nice stuff already especially the garter belts..(va-va-voom)
Went looking for the bullets to fill the clips on those garters.........notta..
Theres hanes and leggs pantyhose but trying to find stockings without the silicone stay ups..impossible Victoria secret, macys, nordstroms..zip zilch and none.. forget about looking for quality brand like Donna Karran (DKNY). Word to the leg men (and women) out there. Stock up on the hoisery before they go the way of the Dodo. Their last place of refuge will be the "adult novelty" stores where they come pre-runned and laddered. Woe-ith me.
I'd love to see Reza have Charlie in some stockings. ;)
DeleteHave a pantyhose and leg fetish... kinda why i think it would be hot for charlie to have the key on her anklet
DeleteGlad you made it to a major point in your process, KT!
ReplyDeleteSeparate Schools, editing in progress!
ReplyDeleteSo I actually did a little research on whether penis's shrink in chastity. Although no evidence really shows that this is so medically, etc. It is a long standing fantasy I think that this can happen and perhaps it does in this series. Would like to see KT explore this option in the incoming Reza books.
ReplyDeleteSame! I actually was looking at that myself, how ironic.
DeleteIt's mostly bull of course (at least from what I've read). That doesn't mean that Reza doesn't slip some things in Jonny's food or some such to make him temp smaller. I've also read that you can give the cuckold what is called a ruined orgasm with massaging the prostate gland? Again lots of things to explore that I'm looking forward (hoping for).
DeleteAnother thing is cream pies... But that would be something that might be too much for some.
Something about "if you dont use it you lose" ...springs to mind. Atrophy is a thing regarding the muscle tissue that support good ejaculation. Also taking testosterone suppressants makes it hard to get ahh..... hard.
DeleteI think it would be nice to see Jonny constantly frustrated/horny though so the suppressants would have to be a 2 edged sword. BTW the Atrophy thing hasn't really been proven from what I read on reddit. However, they know if the cage is to tight that it can cause circulation issues.
DeleteHonestly though I don't want things to get too rough for Jonny's punishments in a way because I'm really feeling a ton of sympathy for the guy. The way he is so gentle with Charlie and is willing to do anything for her makes my love his character. I don't like Tate or Reza because well Tate is just way too 1 dimensional and well a dick. The way he laughed at Jonny's predicament automatically made me dislike the guy. Reza is a villain.
Since the brain is the biggest sex organ. I liked the trips away from johnnys sights. Where johnny has only his imagination and hints that reza leaves him to guess whats going on. Was he really worried about charlie being abused or was there some part of him that desired it?
ReplyDeleteI believe the quote was "dont hurt her" but was it ok to gang bang her?
Out of sight but totally on the mind. Thats more disruptive to johnnys work than when the do it right in front of him. But i do like the little secrets, he took her to lunches , took her to the dressing room, took her on business trip. Eureka! That's cuck gold to me...as well as the bull telling the cuck how hes changed his wife and how she'll never be the same.