HAPPY ENDINGS: TWO
The next book in Tommy and Sukie's story is now available.
I'm glad I decided to do this as a series now. I was able to look at this component in the story and I added so many scenes to help flesh this couple out in this stage of their 'experiment.' There's an extra 15k words than originally intended and they're some of my favorite scenes I've written recently. Like the opening scene. It's brand new, and I sat at a blank screen knowing what I wanted to accomplish but no idea how it would happen. Then boom, these two guys started talking and I wanted to hang out with them all day (at another table!) and hear what shit they had to say. I'm getting to know Tommy better, and Sukie; Dio, too. It's deepening my understanding of them and what's at stake and what they all want. And I thought I already knew that!
Boy, I hope you enjoy it, because I like this couple. They're very different than what I'm used to but I think that's fun.
I'm glad I decided to do this as a series now. I was able to look at this component in the story and I added so many scenes to help flesh this couple out in this stage of their 'experiment.' There's an extra 15k words than originally intended and they're some of my favorite scenes I've written recently. Like the opening scene. It's brand new, and I sat at a blank screen knowing what I wanted to accomplish but no idea how it would happen. Then boom, these two guys started talking and I wanted to hang out with them all day (at another table!) and hear what shit they had to say. I'm getting to know Tommy better, and Sukie; Dio, too. It's deepening my understanding of them and what's at stake and what they all want. And I thought I already knew that!
Boy, I hope you enjoy it, because I like this couple. They're very different than what I'm used to but I think that's fun.
You know what the worst thing about being an obsessed fan is. Waiting (not really that long to be honest) and waiting for the next story to come out, then flying through the story in one determined sitting.
ReplyDeleteIt's just good that her stories don't get old ...
I remember there were a few people during the LHW2 days that said they wished that KT would write a stronger husband character. I didn't agree as much, but I could see their point. Well, read it and weep, Tommy is no pushover. It is an absolutely amazing dynamic that KT has tapped into between Dio, Tommy, and Sukie. In this story it's the survival of the fittest manifested, but everyone is sporting. Loving Sukie wouldn't be fair without a challenger.
I love the trouble that's brewing in this story. How well can Tommy hide that he isn't actually doing business? How good does Tommy understand what's going on in Sukie's mind and heart, especially when he's seeing red. Especially when a lot of what he is understanding what Sukie and Dio are up to, are from what she is lucid/honest enough to divulge. Tommy is a pretty strong judge of character and understands a lot of the world, but he's made some minor miscalculations already. Not really trusting Sukie, not thinking about how Becky will track his mileage, or lack thereof. There may be chinks in Tommy's armor, and maybe thinking that Suke and Dio together is perfectly fine might be another?
Or maybe not, Tommy's got this.
Lol at KT wanting to sit at another table to hear Sukie, Tommy, and Dio's story. Dio used a towel though! She apparently doesn't like New Agey flute music ...
Case in point with the "Chink in Tommy's" armor thought, it's probably my favorite line in the whole story.
DeleteSukie says to Tommy asking her to take it to the next level with Dio, "I want to do that. I want more, but you just don't get it."
Tommy, "I get it."
I'll pop the popcorn ...
I got the beer....
DeleteAnother hot entry, just ratcheting up the tension. With the almost-consummation of Dio and Sukie and the upcoming date they've set of Africa, we have a climactic encounter to build towards. The question remains if maybe Sukie gives in before that date, maybe while Tommy's not around, in an incremental betrayal of the style we've seen before.
ReplyDeleteI'm interested in that glimpse we see, while Dio's egging on Sukie to verbalize that he's bigger than her husband, that maybe Dio gets off on rubbing in how he "bests" Tommy at his own wife.
I'd also like to make a note of how that book club meeting near the end is used. There's an interesting powerlessness a character like Tommy can feel in a group of women like that if they share a joke at his expense. He knows there's no real "comeback" for Amber's taunt/tease that Tommy's wife has been gossiping about his boss's huge dick.
I can only hope we don't have long to wait for the next entry. This certainly feels far more like one story being read in tantalizing sections rather than separate installments.
Glaucon you're on point in this!
DeleteI think Sukie holds out, believe it or not, maybe she'll drum up some loopholes, I love rules in these stories of testing boundaries, as we all know. But I think it'll be some primal, return to the jungle, mad lovemaking in Africa. I think Dio and Sukie want it that way. Build up to insanity and pour it on each other.
Ala Montreal in LHW2?
Definitely enjoyed how uncomfortably aroused Sukie felt about comparing Tommy and Dio, too! Best of all, she felt guilty about it immediately, a caring woman who can't help how she feels. The hottest thing on the planet.
The girl talk was phenomenal! The argument, fantastic tension! One of my favorite moments in a KT story to be honest.
Glaucon, I was thinking of your comment in part 1 in the beginning, were you a little disappointed that Sukie caught Tommy so soon? I was ... it's all good, but I was kind of hoping it would be a little longer before Sukie found out. That would totally change the story of course, and at this point absolutely don't want that. Too good.
Yeah, to be honest I find it hotter when she hasn't gotten her husband's consent. Makes the whole thing feel less safe, more powerful. Of course, the story as is is excellent, just different. I can't expect things perfectly tailored to my tastes haha.
DeleteI love these stories but get all anxious inside at times. I think that Tommy is going to get deeply hurt and potentially end up leaving her. :( I guess I grow to feel for the characters though cause I think that Sukie is going to get just as hurt.
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ReplyDeleteSorry not a directly related to this story (although if kt keeps hittin these outta the park like this we'll have to switch to calling KT "the Babe" you youngins may not get that....)
ReplyDeleteBut i was reminscing on some cuckold themes i found helped funnel me into this genre.
One was from a movie called "hot dog the movie" co-staring shanon tweed. Dam she was single dicks worst nightmare. Many a penis got beat to death over her.
The story is a love story intermingled with skiing hijinks. During a fall out between the primaries a german skier named rudy moves in and seduces the girlfriend.
Heres a clip of the revelation....
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=UmlCdZ3qAh8
Forgot to mention SUNNY is the girlfriends name...
DeleteHa ha, I'm very familiar with this movie!
DeleteBabe? Babe Ruth? I love that candy bar 😃
DeleteThanks for sharing.
Formative movie for me in this genre (we'll kind of) is the movie 'Unfaithful' With Diane Lane and Richard Gere. Movie is scorching hot and finishes extremely dark and unsettling.
Hoo damn ... Diane Lane ...
Dat hallway scene doe...
Unfaithful was good no doubts. I knew it would be the it had the right title.
DeleteHot dog was the one of the first movies that i can remember being turned on by sunny cheating on her bf. It wasnt expected..for me anyway. I think thats the turn on fir me the gf/wife doing the unexpected...like giving her husbands boss a blow job....i didnt think sook would have gone that far on her first time. I figuired she'd just give him a handy and it be over.until the next time...but damm indat azz and all..dio had sunnyside allz zee way aroundz..
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DeleteSpoiler alert Jeff, geez ... 😉
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DeleteJeesh sorry... Thought people saw the movie. Just saying that I prefer Indecent Proposal over Unfaithful though.
DeleteJK, I'm sure if they're on here they probably have. It's a classic movie even without being angsty. Never watched indecent proposal, something tells me I should ...
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Delete"Animal instinct" was supposedly based on a true story about a cop who was a cuck and recorded his wifes many flings with her permission.
DeleteThey tried to downnplay the cuck aspect and pushed just doing it for "research"
It was the eighties so been decades since i seen it...soo grain of salt and all.
Cool ending though and earned enough to warrant a part 2 not nearly as successful.
Btw it was my first wife who tied me tona chair pried my eyes open and forced me to watch it...dam her! Hindsight being 20/20 i think she wanted that life of multiple partners and didnt want all the sneaking....still the hottest i ever had...
DeleteGotta watch Animal Instinct... Sounds hot
DeleteYeah, never seen that—just looked it up and it seems like my kind of jam. I prefer my JMV circa Hooper, but I'll take it.
DeleteThere is nothing really graphic in Indecent Proposal, like in Unfaithful (BTW I love the hallway scene in that, but I also enjoy the scene in the restaurant and right after in his apartment. It's killing Diane Lane to be cheating on her husband, but she also can't resist how good hot French guy makes her feel).
DeleteAnyway, in Indecent Proposal you're just along for the right with Woody Harrelson and his mind fuck as he thinks about what may have happened between his wife and Redford. We never see any of it. But maybe that makes it more hot, its as much in our mind as it in Woody's, though Demi's answer to his question kind of solidifies what happens. Plus, she looks great in that movie...maybe peak Demi. I still have to put the scene in Disclosure with Michael Douglas up there, but man is she attractive in Indecent Proposal.
Also, as am I a connoisseur of late 80's/early 90's softcore HBO/Skinemax movies, I have seen Animal Instincts. Very good, but I prefer another movie...if you can find it, called Killer Looks. Plot is: guy gets off on watching his wife with other men, but likes to come in playing the jealous husband and chase the guys off. Problems arise when they meet a guy who he really dislikes, but that the wife is into. She brings him back to their place without telling the husband, thinking he'll be into it. And he is, but he also isn't...just a great little cuckold mind fuck that fits in well with the stories we like to read. No idea where you can still find it...I haven't seen it in 20 years. Maybe its on Youtube like everything else.
DeleteListen can we persuade you to immediately release part 3? Maybe it's my birthday! Pssssssh editing doesn't matter. I want to hear all about that trip to Arfica!
ReplyDeleteYeah, come on KT, it's Glaucon's birthday 😀.
DeleteNo one is going to call out your dangling participles.
Happy birthday, Glaucon!
Coincidentally, I'm currently writing about Dio's dangling participle.
DeleteAnd Happy Birthday, Glaucon!
When it says EDITING, it means: still writing! I'm not just editing, I'm turning what was once one book into four books, so now each part has been fleshed out. And I fuckin' swore I would never do this again! When I find characters I like, it's kind of their fault, cause they won't stop talking and whispering all the dirty things they want to do to each other!
DeleteFunny note: I'm so sensitive to this genre, despite the fact I write it, I can't watch Indecent Proposal! Even though part of me is like Is it cheating of it's for a million dollars?
Thank you both for the birthday wishes!
DeleteKT, I can't remember the last story you released where you DIDN'T say you liked the characters haha. I think it's more your fault than theirs for writing three dimensional people.
PS that reminds me of some horror creators who are notorious scaredy cats.
I liked Camberly, but I know I'm done with them. I wholeheartedly love Natalie and Nelson and Renny, and they would have a series but I was temporarily strong last December. I can make all sorts of promises here how I'll reform my long winded ways, but it's pretty obvious by now I'm a blowhard and big talker.
DeleteWho's a scaredy-cat horror writer, ha ha?
Alfred Hitchcock was reputedly easily scared, for one.
DeleteAh-hah, you're right, I knew that and forgot it. I read that Stephen King pooped his pants writing Pet Sematary.
DeleteIn Stephen King's case, that may have been drug-related...
DeleteYes, 1983, almost definitely a cocaine poop.
DeleteWhy am I not surprised KT is the one who turned my innocent statement about editing into a euphemism, I knew someone would immediately after I typed it.
DeleteHonestly KT, I was pleasantly shocked to hear you were going to try to make a novel and deliver it as such, I thought it was an interesting change of pace. Honestly though, putting the selfishness aside of wanting everything now (now!), series are my favorite. I know most people like the shorts, but I get more out of your stories obsessing over their fragments.
This blog will be a million times better with series anyways.
Side note, when did your blog get spam prone? I don't know about y'all but I'm about to cast spells on people and enhance my size with Dr. Harry. I mean it must be true IF IT'S IN ALL CAPS!
Well I am so looking forward to this series. It's real good thus far with a lot of emotional anxiety which is why I love it so much.
DeleteTotes just realized that Sook mentioned twice she touched Dio's cock accidentally the very first rub down. Oh thaaat's what "erector spinae" was all about. She had me fooled. What a layered interaction, that. I don't know what totally to make of it. She did it accidentally, but played it off? Good stuff, KT.
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ReplyDeleteI dont know how sukie will resist another 3 weeks(6 sessions not including any midnight emergency "ive gotta cramp in my dick" calls)
ReplyDeleteWhat i am pretty sure is that when sukie an dio get together in Africa for the first time.....
its gonna look like a pride of lions tore up dio and a herd of elephant stampeded up sukies crotch...
https://youtu.be/FTQbiNvZqaY
Almost forgot tommy....hes gonna look like the chimp at the zoo jacking off
DeleteAhh well... I suppose Tommy always has Heidi as option B...
DeleteHe's gotta survive Africa first....
DeleteSo far i get the vibe that tommy will be ok with suki banging dio but not ok with dio bragging about it..although that may turn out to be the ultimate kink for him..
Interesting book club discussions about SM/BD... slave auction...wonder if theres a tease in there...
I think he's way more jealous than he realizes and it's going to eat him alive especially if she starts spending more time with Dio. I guess we'll wait and see what part 3 brings.
DeleteYea this is the sweet spot of the story the will he wont he will she wont she..hes had flashes of the dnagerous angst but buried it in his love and same for suki..now if he starts seeing a genuine connection between them both cuckold gold and terror.
Deleteyou know I was gonna respond to this, and then Johnny nailed.
DeleteI will say this, Tommy talks a good game. He wants the top shelf for his top shelf wife, has the confidence to say that at the end of the day she loves him. It was touching when he said as much to Sook, she likes that about her husband. He seems genuinely hapoy for her. The problem, of course, is when you've had the best, hard to go back to second rate.
*dodges punch from Tommy*
I'm not saying Tommys second rate but it's true just generally speaking, thereotically, ya know.
Something tells me that Tommy is slightly delusional, he's so right about most things, makes most things happen even if they wouldn't naturally, that he might have convinced himself everything's fine. But Tommy might not know (can't really know) everything that's happening here.
We'll see how well he knows Sukie and Dio, and if he can adapt if he miscalculates!
He's kind of being a fool actually. 8 inches is pretty damn big and I kind of picture Dio is a complete douchebag and a manipulative one at that. Truth is, it seems to me that Dio is the second rate one. Tommy lacks self value which might lead to his undoing. Hope we can find out soon.
DeleteYea i see tommy as the all around gold medalist in the triathalon while dio wins the gold for the pole vault. And to your point 2b2h...
DeleteTommys the one that gets the sponsors while dio partys with the players.
Question is which does sook prefer is she into pole vaulting and parties or prefer a bruce jenner ....(wait..whaaaat? Ok that could be either or on the good bad scale.) Or does she like a athlete that is strong in different areas who knows how to be a pro.. lets not forget the kids they will have that to act as the crazy glue that keeps them together. Unless dio pulls a tyler...oh snap...
Jeff - to be honest I kind of find both of them to be a bit douchey. Both have an arrogance that holds themselves to a high degree so I don't think Tommy has a poor self evaluation, though maybe you could argue he has poorer srlf-esteem when he compares himself to Dio. I don't think so though, i think he sees Dio as being young and stupid, just attractive. All said right now I don't really see that much of a difference between Tommy and Dio personality-wise.
DeleteI think Tommy as an idiot with a small amount of douchy element. Thinking that his wife might be sleeping around on him and planting a hidden camera isn't that douche like considering people often hire private investigators. He does have a poor self-esteem and not just the way he compares himself to Dio I think.
DeleteJust a thought... Maybe Tommy doesn't feel like he's worthy of his wife and wants her to be happy with someone else better than him. These kind of thoughts depress me lol.
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DeleteNot to sure on douche train of thought . I think tommy got caught up unexpectantly into a kink he never knew existed (at least for himself)
DeleteThat his wife had her own or shared the kink with him is icing on the top..i havent seen him act douche to sook yet not in a sense that he treats her poorly or denys her things..they seem like fair partners in this excursion to me ..
The moments that we get hung up on is the way they treat each other during the acts...i didnt think sook would allow penetration in all her holes her first time with dio after tommy pushed/allowes her to free pass with dio. Oops
The way the story opens is a happy family and i still see that although the potential for the doucheness is definatly on the rise. Dio on the other hand is definatly a scumbag.
But it is an interesting point about the video camera..i wouldnt call it a invasion of privacy since the massage took place in the middle of his back yard.
Which keeps sook more honest i think than if it was behind close doors. But it was a bit distrustful of sook...i think he wanted to secretly see something there .....which would have been douche.
Oh well different opinions
Meh, Tommy isn't really a douchebag, but then I also am not sure Dio is a douchrbag either, well I'm more sure Dio is. Some of the things he says, like calling his wife 'kid,' symptom of douchedom. Lol, there's better examples, I'm just saying to me Dio and Tommy are cut from the same cloth. Tommy is just more mature, methinks.
Deleteby 'he' who's calling Soon, 'kid' I mean Tommy of course.
DeleteYea i think dio is a little shit but hes smart too..i dont think it will be long if he doesnt already suspect that tommy is ok with what hes doing..some of the conversations he has with tommy were designed to feel tommy out i think. Also telling sook hes wanted her for a long time...trying real hard to get in her deep. hes definitely not the good guy here. Tommy should have
DeleteSook choose a safe word so he knows when shes out of sorts. He may not because he's new to the game and isn't aware of the dangers.
I think the players are still feeling their own selves out just yet but dio by far going after his best employee and someone he would call friend wife. Now thats douche. Also jerking off on tommys patio real scumbag move.
Question there is was he really being narcisstic watching himself in the glass or was he imagining sook watching him. Even if its both thats a problem in a self control kinda way.
Tommy is being naive i think if you wanna equate that to douchiness i get it.
Hes exploring an area hes never been before and right now he's ridingn the crest of the wave..we'll have to see how he feels about it when in the life style for awhile post coitus. Will poor sook be able to shut down if he has a problem with it? Not that easy since she has some problem resisting dio's soul gazing eyes.
Sook is also making plenty of mistakes herself. She's not considering how her husband really feels about the whole thing. If he's acting this upset at this point of time it's going to get worse and he might eventually walk out if things get too out of hand. She might end up with Dio for a short while but her attraction to him is superficial at best. I don't think she knows him enough to really love him or anything and once she does I bet he'll be fucking around almost every week.
DeleteDio isn't the settling down sort.
I agree sook maybe taking tommys heightened libido as proof to go further. Maybe dio starts whispering those sweet nothings in her ear like tommys really not enough for you..
DeleteTommy is a sub etc etc.....
Sook pushes boundaries and tommy seems ok with it ...
Ahhhh the suspense. Watching that completion bar slowly tick upwards in wordcount, I know I should stop rechecking all the time!
ReplyDeleteIm in good company then...resistance is futile.
DeleteProofing! *clutches heart*
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DeletePerhaps Tommy will spring for a hammam/steam room next to the cabana where she can work her magic on the tired and stressed bodies. After all, Atlanta does get cool in the winter and she needs to keep her customer base happy all year round.
ReplyDeleteOf course one downside (heh) of giving massages in the hammam is that she will have to be naked while rubbing up her customers. Otherwise, the sweat becomes unbearable and drops from the clothing on to the customer in a most unappealing manner. Come to think of it, guys, that may be more of a feature than it is a bug.
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DeleteMaybe dio gets sook to volunteer for a maid for a day auction for a good charity.
DeleteOR
Dio and tommy need her to seal the deal So she has to go out with the norwegian boys or some other power player for the contract to go thru....
Probably ought to add a sauna to take care of the Bond villains as well. Optimal temperature for sauna massage is well below the usual 190-200, but you still have to take it all off.
DeleteI wasn't expecting it tonight or nothin' just want to say KT, you got this! I'll be ready!
ReplyDeleteI think the Happy Endings series is my favorite on Amazon. Thank you very much for this story! I love all the characters and particularly Sook and Dio. The detail you put into Dio's manly parts is exquisite. Perhaps these characters can get more books? I would love to see Dio putting Sook to work on some of his clients, for instance. Please release Book 4 soon, I don't know how much longer I can wait! :)
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